Vladimir Ermolaev, Thank you for the feedback - it's important for the author and future works. You can criticize, too ))
Zer, And there's nothing much to criticize... the work is based on feelings, that's important to me... For some reason, the film "My Friend Ivan Lapshin" came to mind; your work resonates with it surprisingly.... Thank you.
Zer, And there's not much to criticize... the work is based on feelings, for me that's important... For some reason, the film "My Friend Ivan Lapshin" came to mind, your work resonates with it surprisingly... Thank you.
Vladimir Ermolaev, I'm glad the work turned out well and resonates with you intuitively. )