Perhaps especially the center. A little more structure and saturation would be nice, but the brightness needs to be dialed back. Yellow doesn't like to glow.

Perhaps, especially the central part. A little more structure and saturation would be nice, but the brightness needs to be toned down. Yellow doesn't like to glow.

Serj Kirillov, There are several variations on this theme; we were waiting for the sun to reach the central part. There was an option to imitate Kuindzhi... I'll listen to your thoughts, thank you!