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Photo by ultimar, photographer. Cityscapes. SONY ILCE-7M2, published 06.01.2018.
Comments 33
Dis Sident
Dis Sident 105.37
06.01.2018 08:46
4 interesting zones have formed View crop only the top will be somehow distracted;)
ultimar 205.07
06.01.2018 08:50
dis-sident, well, he left absolutely nothing behind
I'm looking for a red one and the stairs to LSU are on point
Dis Sident
Dis Sident 105.37
06.01.2018 08:59
ultimar, I'm not suggesting cutting it like that, I just indicated it
Reflex 10.77
06.01.2018 12:48
dis-sident, Yeah, the top is distracting. Just maybe not so radically View crop ?
Vlad O. 5.13
06.01.2018 13:17
+1 for cutting off the top
ultimar 205.07
06.01.2018 16:20
Reflex, Vlad I, I can only go for this) View crop
Reflex 10.77
06.01.2018 16:52
Reflex, Vlad I, that's all I can do) View crop
ultimar,
Thanks for that! ))))
ultimar 205.07
06.01.2018 16:56
Reflex, thank you!
Anonym 0.00
06.01.2018 19:25
ultimar,
The top here cannot be cut off! Under no circumstances! It creates the perfect dissonance!
ultimar 205.07
06.01.2018 20:10
ultimar,
The top here cannot be cut off! Under any circumstances! It creates the right dissonance!
Anonymous, I resisted for a long time)) one against three) I almost gave in reluctantly
Thanks for the support!
Vlad O. 5.13
06.01.2018 20:34
Ladies, you're not clueless, ultimar and Anonymous
ultimar 205.07
06.01.2018 21:02
Vlad I, you don’t understand anything about sausage scraps))
Vlad O. 5.13
06.01.2018 22:05
Vlad I, you don't understand anything about sausage scraps))
ultimar, it turns out like this)
Yaroslava Abramenko (Hamamoto)
10.01.2018 09:37
I like it exactly this way
ultimar 205.07
10.01.2018 10:27
Yaroslava Abramenko (Hamamoto), our ranks have grown))
Mihail 57 Mir
Mihail 57 Mir 197.61
11.01.2018 14:29
I think the cropped top (the Reflex crop) makes the shot look sleek.
The top doesn't contain any bright or distracting details, especially since the focus is on the
fields and the man. And the manhole covers and trash bins on the left balance the frame perfectly. Great composition!
Tpv Vp 6.20
11.01.2018 14:36
ultimar, was there anything on the left? (meaning, they didn't cut it?)
11.01.2018 14:40
I vote for the framing option suggested by Reflex, because it eliminates the "grounding" details in the frame and creates a different feel...the geometry is at work. It's certainly not Escher-esque silent art, but the impression it conveys is similar.
ultimar 205.07
11.01.2018 14:41
And it seems to me that with the cropped top (the Reflex cropping option) the frame looks "sleek."
Mikhail 57 Mir, that's the same for me, and the color is boring too
ultimar 205.07
11.01.2018 14:43
Hello everyone, I straightened it out and trimmed it just a little on the right and top. In reality, there was a black trash can behind the island.
Marina Glebova
11.01.2018 14:45
Here, to cut means to spoil.
Tpv Vp 6.20
11.01.2018 14:46
ultimar, I got it. I just wanted to take a look at the curve on the left) - maybe there would be more top)
ultimar 205.07
11.01.2018 14:46
Alexander Zeonoff, thanks for your opinion! It seems like geometry "works" anyway, since it creates such an impression.
Tpv Vp 6.20
11.01.2018 14:51
ultimar, and also, why about the left one? A tree would hold this stepped pyramid neatly like that. View crop
And if it's as is, then I like it exactly as is.
11.01.2018 14:52
Alexander Zeonoff, thanks for your opinion! It seems like geometry "works" anyway, since it evokes such an impression)
ultimar, work works are different. There's a concept in the "psychology of perception" called gestalt. So, in the case of a full frame, your version is a gestalt deformed by a "grounding" background, and this is no longer the image of an Escher mosaic... this is a frame about something else. This is that slightly Bryullovian quality that distinguishes the work of an artisan from the work of an artist. My opinion, of course.
Marina Glebova
11.01.2018 14:53
ultimar, look, at the top left, there's a light, expanding, somewhat rounded shape going left. We can't lose it; it supports the yellow, rounded shape in the middle, going right, well. Further diagonally, this light shape is supported by a light square in the stump. The result in the photo is two distinct diagonals. And if you crop the top, the light shape will be lost, and this diagonal will also be lost.
Tpv Vp 6.20
11.01.2018 14:56
Marina Glebova, that’s what I say/think – there’s not even enough top.
ultimar 205.07
11.01.2018 14:57
Hi everyone, I can't get much more of the top - I took it from the window.
I'll satisfy your curiosity. Here's one without the girl, but with the curves:
Marina Glebova
11.01.2018 14:59
without a girl
ultimar, and without a square in the pnu (
Tpv Vp 6.20
11.01.2018 15:00
ultimar, thanks) I guessed right with the tree, ziggurat and island.
ultimar 205.07
11.01.2018 15:01
ultimar, look, at the top left, there's a light, expanding, somewhat rounded shape going left. We can't lose it. It supports the yellow, rounded shape in the middle, going right, and then diagonally, it's supported by the light square in the stump. And if you cut it off at the top, the light shape will be lost, and this diagonal will be lost too.
Marina Glebova, I immediately told Dissident about this, but I didn't bother explaining it—he's smart enough himself.
Yaroslava Abramenko (Hamamoto)
17.01.2018 08:23
Yaroslava Abramenko (Hamamoto), our ranks have grown))
ultimar, I stop by periodically)
ultimar 205.07
17.01.2018 09:19
Yaroslava Abramenko (Hamamoto), always glad to see you) come in, stop by))
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